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“Death Defiant Bomba or What to Wear When Your Boo Gets Cancer” by Lilliam Rivera

This week, I’m thrilled to talk about “Death Defiant Bomba or What to Wear When Your Boo Gets Cancer” by Lilliam Rivera. I met Lilliam at an awe-inspiring AROHO Writing Retreat at Ghost Ranch in New Mexico a few years back, where we climbed red rocks and talked like sisters. Since then, she’s recently published her book, The Education of Margot Sanchez (go read it!), a contemporary young adult novel from Simon & Schuster. The story we’re reading this week was originally published in Bellevue Literary Review and was a Pushcart Prize winner. I’m not going to even mention all her other stories and awards, but let’s just say this girl’s been busy (and you can read more about her here).

A few questions to get us talking about this death-defiant story:

  • Would this piece work as wonderfully if it wasn’t told in second-person?
  • Why the red dress?
  • Bomba is a traditional Puerto Rican music and dance performance, and Lilliam uses the structure of the song and dance to frame the story. What effect does this have? Can you think of any other stories or books that use a similar method?

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“I Love Girl” by Simon Rich

This week we’re reading a funny caveman story from the New Yorker titled “I Love Girl” by Simon Rich. According to the New Yorker, “Simon Rich tells the tale of a lovesick caveman, Oog, whose nemesis, Boog, has captured the attention of Oog’s beloved Girl with his abstract cave paintings and blustery self-confidence.”

Simon Rich has written several works of fiction, including “Spoiled Brats,” a collection of stories. He is also the creator and showrunner of “Man Seeking Woman,” on FXX.

The story starts:

I am Oog. I love Girl. Girl loves Boog.

It is bad situation.

It’s basically every love triangle ever written, but somehow Rich injects such humor and humanity into his caveman story. I hope you enjoy it!

Questions:

  1. How does Rich keep the love triangle trope while also subverting it?
  2. Does the language bother you, or does it better transport you into the caveman point of view?
  3. How does Rich make a caveman story so relatable?
  4. Was the ending satisfying? Unexpected?

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“This Savage Song” by Victoria “V.E.” Schwab

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This week we’re diving into the first chapter of the YA fantasy novel This Savage Song by Victoria “V.E.” Schwab. It’s an opening chapter that snatched me up like the dark monsters that lurk in this deliciously savage story. Here’s a little more about the book:

“Kate Harker and August Flynn are the heirs to a divided city—a city where the violence has begun to breed actual monsters. All Kate wants is to be as ruthless as her father, who lets the monsters roam free and makes the humans pay for his protection. All August wants is to be human, as good-hearted as his own father, to play a bigger role in protecting the innocent—but he’s one of the monsters. One who can steal a soul with a simple strain of music. When the chance arises to keep an eye on Kate, who’s just been kicked out of her sixth boarding school and returned home, August jumps at it. But Kate discovers August’s secret, and after a failed assassination attempt the pair must flee for their lives. In This Savage Song, Victoria Schwab creates a gritty, seething metropolis, one worthy of being compared to Gotham and to the four versions of London in her critically acclaimed fantasy for adults, A Darker Shade of Magic. Her heroes will face monsters intent on destroying them from every side—including the monsters within.”

A few questions to consider as you read the first chapter:

1) How does Schwab balance world-building and backstory while still writing a captivating scene?
2) Throughout the book, Schwab blurs the lines between human and monster. How does she show this even from the start?
3) There’s a lot of pressure for the first chapter to basically accomplish everything. How do you feel about Kate Harker, and what threads has Schwab sewn into the first chapter to hint at where the character arc and conflict are heading?

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“I Can See Right Through You” by Kelly Link

Kelly Link Get in Trouble

Take a wild clip-cut cinematographic ride into this week’s story “I Can See Right Through You” by Kelly Link. It was originally published in McSweeney’s Quarterly and was included in her short story collection Get in Trouble, a 2016 Pulitzer Prize Finalist. According to Kirkus Reviews: “In stories as haunting as anything the Grimm brothers could have come up with, Link (Magic for Beginners, 2005, etc.) gooses the mundane with meaning and enchantment borrowed from myth, urban legend and genre fiction. ….  In “I Can See Right Through You,” an actor past his prime, famous for his role as a vampire, yearns for the leading lady who has replaced him with a parade of eternally younger versions of what he once was—but who is the real demon lover?”

Kelly Link is the author of the collections Stranger Things Happen, Magic for Beginners, Pretty Monsters, and Get in Trouble. Her short stories have been published in The Magazine of Fantasy & Science Fiction, The Best American Short Stories, and Prize Stories: The O. Henry Awards, etc.

Questions

  1. Near the beginning of the story, she writes, “Film can be put together in any order. Scenes shot in any sequence. Take as many as you like. Continuity is independent of linear time. Sometimes you aren’t even in the scene together. Meggie says her lines to your stand-in. They’ll splice you together later on.” The story jumps through time and throws us little snippets and “stand-ins” (both literally and figuratively) for Meggie and the demon lover. What does Link accomplish with this style, and what makes it successful?
  2. What do you think happened in the end? How does it tie back to the Ouija board from the beginning of the story?
  3. Why does Link call the narrator “demon lover” for most of the story until very late in the narrative when he’s named “Will Gald”? Why wait until he’s on camera?
  4. How does the setting contribute to the mood of the story?

Happy reading and fantasizing about your very first “demon lover”   😉

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How I Found my Agent on Twitter!

Reblogging to the Mugsters!

Andrea Ellickson

I’m thrilled to announce that I’ve signed with Tricia Lawrence at the Erin Murphy Literary Agency!
Tricia Lawrence Agent Erin Murphy Literary
Now, let me toss off my writer hat and bust out the math:
AGENT QUERY STATS

Total submitted: 33 agents
Sources: Writing in the Margins Query Contest Winner (6 agent requests);
#DVpit Twitter Pitch Contest (19 agent requests); various other SCBWI resources
Timeline: I submitted to agents in March and April 2016, and then signed with an offer in May 2016!
Full requests :15   *happy dance followed by sheer panic at waiting for responses*
Offers:3   (Yes, THREE! This was a hard choice, and in the end I went with the agent that I connected with the most and knew would be an advocate for my work and bring diverse voices to mainstream fiction because #WNDB. Plus, Erin Murphy Literary Agency is a fabulous agency for the Children’s and YA book market!)

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“The Right Sort” by David Mitchell

"The Right Sort" - David Mitchell

Can you tell a short story on Twitter without going stir-crazy with the 140-character limit?

This week, we’re reading a short story originally published on Twitter by one of my favorite authors. David Mitchell is the award-winning and bestselling author of Slade House, The Bone Clocks, The Thousand Autumns of Jacob de Zoet, Black Swan Green, Cloud Atlas, Number9Dream, and Ghostwritten. Twice shortlisted for the Man Booker Prize, Mitchell was named one of the 100 most influential people in the world by Time in 2007.

Mitchell isn’t afraid to cross genres in his novels, and so it wasn’t a big surprise that he made the leap to Twitter. He posted “The Right Sort” in the form of 280 tweets over one week. In the story, a teenage boy named Nathan Bland is dragged to a party at the mysterious posh house of Lady Briggs. He slips one of his mother’s Valium pills to help with his anxiety, and from there the story dives into a strange and suspenseful tale that would give Edgar Allan Poe the shivers.

Here are a few discussion questions:

  • Did the Twitter format change your experience of his story?
  • Although we experienced reading this story in one sitting in a continuous stream, how do you think Twitter fans would have experienced this story in real time?
  • Could this Twitter format have worked if it was a romance or comedy, instead of a suspense story?
  • Did Mitchell leave out any story elements due to space constraints? Did it feel like a full story?

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“Anything Helps” by Jess Walter

Recently, I attended the “Write by the Lake” workshop at University of Wisconsin at Madison. My specific session called “Creating Momentum” was focused on maintaining tension and conflict in every scene. In just one week, our teacher Tim Storm managed to pack in an incredible amount of helpful revision techniques.

One of the stories we read really stuck with me, and I’d love to share it with ya’ll. “Anything Helps” by Jess Walter debuted in McSweeney’s, was subsequently chosen for Best American Short Stories 2012, and is also included in his short story collection We Live in Water.

WeLiveinWater - Jess Walter

Here’s a little more about the author: Jess Walter is the author of six novels, most recently the New York Times bestseller Beautiful Ruins (2012). He was a finalist for the 2006 National Book Award for The Zero and winner of the 2005 Edgar Allan Poe Award for best novel for Citizen Vince. His short fiction and essays have appeared in Harper’s, McSweeney’s, Playboy and other publications. He lives in his hometown of Spokane, Washington.

And now, a few questions to get your brain percolating:

– How does Walter go beyond the typical story of a homeless man down on his luck?

– How does he make you connect to the main character versus walking past, eyes averted, coins flung to the ground?

– How does Walter built tension throughout the story?

– Were any of the events in the story expected?

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“Breaker” by Tommy Wallach

This week’s published story is “Breaker” by Tommy Wallach. He is a Brooklyn-based writer and musician. His debut YA novel, We All Looked Up, came out in March, and is a NY Times Bestseller. He also made a soundtrack for his book… talk about multi-talented! It’s the story of a group of teens facing the life-changing possibility of an asteroid hurtling toward the Earth. Madness, I know, but Wallach manages to create beautifully complex and honest characters that makes the whole premise worth it. Trust me.

"We All Looked Up" By: Tommy Wallach

“We All Looked Up” (book cover) – Tommy Wallach

I came across Tommy Wallach’s writing after seeing him in a panel at the LA Times Festival of Books panel along with Aaron Hartzler, David Levithan, and Leila Sales. (Fellow Mugster, Taylor Ross joined me for a day brimming with all sorts of literary ear-candy!)

Anyway, I loved his debut novel We All Looked Up, and during the panel, he mentioned that he published a story in McSweeney’s that was one of his proud accomplishments. The story is very different from his YA novel. It’s brief, so go read it now!

Some questions to mull over while reading:

1) Does his use of repetition distract you or deepen your experience of the story? Or any other ways it affected you?

2) How does the repetition tie back to the idea of being a “breaker”?

3) How do you feel about how he addresses the reader at the beginning?

4) How do the gun shots and the broken condoms come together in the story?

–Andrea

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The Dream of Readers

“Nothing holds you to the task like the dream of readers,” said Junot Diaz from the microphone. I sat sprawled on stage in front of a room brimming with over 200 readers and writers. Except I wasn’t on stage to read or inspire; I was there to listen and to dream.

Junot Diaz  at the VONA Faculty Reading.

On stage with Junot Diaz at the VONA Voices Faculty Reading

Last week, I attended “Articulations: The VONA/Voices Faculty Reading,” which featured Chris Abani, Elmaz Abinader, Faith Adiele, Staceyann Chin, Junot Diaz, Tananarive Due, M. Evelina Galang, Mat Johnson, Randall Kenan, Marjorie Liu, David Mura, Willie Perdomo, Andrew X. Pham, and Patricia Smith–an all-star line-up with an incredible stage presence.

VONA Reading 2014

Although many of the readings brought me to the precipice of hope, desperation, hilarity and a deeply buried recognition of my mixed race roots, it was the crowd that really caught my attention.

It was the “dream of readers.”

Cheering, whooping, laughing, damn. Oh, damn. Readers so engaged in the words that I felt like I was at a rock concert without the mosh-pit because writers are just a little too civilized for that (well, almost). I’ve never been to a reading with so much energy that the auditorium could hardly contain us. Readers spilled into adjoining rooms and watched on video conference, while a few lucky ones (me included) were brought up to the stage to sit at the footsteps of these literary legends. The energy was catching, contagious, alive.

Why was this reading different from many others I’ve attended? My guess would be because it was lead by the Voices of Our Nation Arts Foundation. VONA was founded by Elmaz Abinader, Junot Díaz, Victor Díaz and Diem Jones in 1999. As the website says, “Each envisioned an arts organization that could change the landscape for writers of color by supporting individual writer growth, creating a platform for community engagement and providing a workshop and mentor focus to expand writing opportunities.”

Keyword in this paragraph: “a platform for community engagement.” And damn, this Berkeley & San Francisco community was engaged. People weren’t just listening, they were reacting. Yes, the words were powerful. Yes, the speakers were powerful. Yes, the community was powerful. And yes, this is the dream.

Next time I’m on stage with the likes of Junot Diaz, it’ll be because I’ve earned it with my own words.

I also had the lucky opportunity to catch up with my lovely and talented AROHO sister, Lilliam Rivera, who was also one of the writers participating in the VONA Workshop in Berkeley.

I also had the lucky opportunity to catch up with my lovely and talented AROHO sister Lilliam Rivera, who was also one of the writers participating in the VONA Voices Workshop in Berkeley.

 

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“The Man Who Forgot Ray Bradbury” – Neil Gaiman

This week’s published piece is “The Man Who forgot Ray Bradbury” by Neil Gaiman. In case you’ve been living under a rock in an alternate universe, Neil Gaiman is  an English author of short fiction, novels, comic books, graphic novels, audio theatre and films. His notable works include the comic book series The Sandman and novels Stardust, American Gods, Coraline, and The Graveyard Book. He has won numerous awards, including the Hugo, Nebula, and Bram Stoker awards, as well as the Newbery and Carnegie medals.

This story is included in the short story collection Shadow Show inspired by literary legend, Ray Bradbury. In the story, the narrator wakes up one day and realizes he’s forgotten something very important, and struggles to regain that missing piece. I won’t say any more about it, because it’s one of those stories you have to just read, and not summarize!

Think about these questions as you read:

1) Would this story have as much impact if you didn’t know anything about Ray Bradbury and his legacy of stories?

2) How does Gaiman evoke a sense of forgetting? How does he “show” this?

3) As the narrator forgets words and struggles to remember them, how does he “creep up on them from another direction?” And how does the author creep up on the central idea of his story? Is this method effective ?

Enjoy!

— Andrea

 

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